This is just a silly little piece I scribbled out a little while ago. I think it's quite fun, hope you enjoy it.
The character was a mouse, small wispy whiskers and a plump belly.
"I say, that's a bit rude," he said.
I started a little, not expecting the response.
"Sorry. But it is rather rotund," I explained.
"Yes, but you wrote me like that."
"True. But your love of cheese and chocolate digestives played a part."
The mouse looked downcast.
"So I shall only be svelte and lithe if I don't eat any cheese and chocolate digestives?" he asked.
"I'm afraid so," I nodded.
"I don't think it's worth it," he said, plopping down on his bottom and pulling a crumb of cheese from his knapsack.
I wondered what I could do with him.
"An adventure, of course," he said, although I had not spoken.
"What kind?" I enquired.
The mouse looked thoughtful, patting his belly slowly.
"I think I should like the beach very much," he decided.
"Is the beach really a place for adventures?" I asked
"Not especially, but I do like ice cream."
I paused.
"You're the one who suggested adventures, mouse," I said.
"Mmm. But food is a very important part of adventures you know."
4/03/2011
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